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Compare and Contrast: Two kinds of transportation/ DRIVING & FLYING


astuart 1 / -  
Jun 8, 2013   #1
School is out and summer is here us and with that being said many are planning senior trips, family vacations, etc. Many plan their destinations months in advance, but not all know how their getting there. Obviously, driving or flying is the most common of all transportation. Whether you fly or drive there are many things to consider: price, miles, money, and time. First, one may compare cost, how much one can afford to spend on travel. If you are going long distances driving can become expansive do to high gas rates. Similarly, flying also takes a pretty penny with airfare and baggage. Secondly, one will have to take milage into consideration. If your destination is close by, or a few hours a way driving is your cheapest bet. In contrast, going out of the country or traveling across country flying is more affordable and for some places your only option. Also, flying is the quickest way to arrive at your destination. Whereas, driving is very time consuming it can take hours to days.
temptprovidence 8 / 163 35  
Jun 9, 2013   #2
expansive due

expe nsive... spelling error .
good one. is the length short according to your requirement?
dumi 1 / 6,927 1592  
Jun 23, 2013   #3
Many plan their destinations months in advance, but not all know how their getting there.

Many have plans in months advance for the destinations where they want to be, but not everybody knows about how they are going to get there.

Obviously, driving or flying is the most common of all transportationmodes.

price, miles, money, and time

... how about comfort? That too matters a lot!

If you are going long distances driving can become expansive dodue to high gas ratesfuel costs .

Similarly, flying also takes a pretty penny with airfare and baggage.

Similarly, flying also would take every penny you saved with high airfares.
Pahan 1 / 1,906 553  
Jun 24, 2013   #4
Secondly, one will have to take milage into consideration.

Secondly, it is also important to consider the distance you intend to travel.

In contrast, going out of the country or traveling across country flying is more affordable and for some places your only option.

... here the issue is that travelling on surface would take a much longer time. It's actually not about the price, but time, convenience and comfort. I strongly feel, air travel is anyway more expensive than all other modes.

Your essay needs better organization of ideas. They seem to be scattered sporadically. Arrange them in a more logical sequence and re-write this essay.


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