school budgetS were
SPENT to pay the teacher's salary in each year. In any case, majority of the areas experienced a fluctuation (I am not sure such a word can be used here. I suggest omitting this part.) during the period, while insurance
COST saw an upward trend.
school in UK spent their budget mostly to pay the teachers, (STOP HERE) THIS RECORDED more than two fifths from the percentage,
INCREASING from only 40% in 1981.
spending in furniture and equipment
WAS NOTED AS the second highest of proportion in 2001 with 23%,
A RISE OF only 5% in 1991 and 15% in 1981 respectively.
Spent in the resources field
Money spent in other resources
with less than a fifth
in the beginning
AT THE BEGINNING OF THE PERIOD and
with only about 9% in the REMAINDER OF THE period
Overall, you could write well. Yet, slight mistakes could ruin your score. It is always good to spend five minutes to check you grammar, prior to ending your report essay. Good Luck.