regardless competitive ones
this doesnt make any sense, plz try to elaborate for this is polluting the sense of the whole sentence
It is not only train students a determined mind of competition, but it also help them build a team spirit.
it not only trains students a determined mind of competition, but it also helps them to build a team spirit.
Based on those above ideas, I can conclude how beneficial and necessarily useful of sport games, including competitive games in school. Consequently, competitive sports should be remained in school.
Based on these above ideas, I can conclude how beneficial and necessary useful are sport games, including competitive games in school. Consequently, competitive sports should be included in the school curriculum.
reduce potential diseases
what are potential diseases?
I think sport has brought benefits to student's physical and spirit trainings
it must be spiritual training
and also according to the questions you quoted no particular example... plus in the first line of your threads, you have written "make errors for me"... it must be "point out errors for me" :) please dont mind it and dont take it as a critical approach.. just meant to help you... BEST OF LUCK... :)