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Writing IELTS task 1 : the components of a wind turbine and where it can be placed


hailun11 12 / 14 3  
Aug 30, 2016   #1
TASK 1.

There are two diagrams below which show the mechanism from a wind turbine to produce electrical energy for humans. Overall, those are noticeable that first graph is the process of a wind turbine, then in the second stage is the optimal location to generate electricity.

The process starts, a wind turbine consists of five stages to produce electrical power, such as blades-fiberglass or wood; wind sensor-speed and direction; generator; steel tower; computer. The steel tower which is made from steel will become high tower to become buffer zone. Here, when the wind goes to wind sensor which is as speed and direction. At the same time, the sensor accepted through generator with voltage 1.5 megawatts. Immediately, the blades-fiberglass or wood will move to produce electrical energy. In addition, there is someone to control sensor adjust blades by computer.

The next stage is the condition how the wind turbine will be working. To get maximum result of power electricity from wind turbine, should be placed on the top-because it will give strong point to get wind power. So, in the report was expression that it should be been position in the domestic average 100 kilowatts.


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eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,198 464  
Aug 30, 2016   #2
Hi there...., including the original prompt of this diagram is a must, as to know that you are being measured how good your paraphrased sentence in the opening paragraph is.

There are two diagrams below which show the mechanism from a wind turbine to produce electrical energy for humans.

The diagram shows how a wind turbine is built for electrical energy purposes.

Overall, those are noticeable that first graph is the process of a wind turbine

What stands out from the first graph is that the process of a wind turbine needs some advanced steps.

then in the second stage is the optimal location to generate electricity.

While the latter one tells us some potential locations of such a generator as to produce more results.

Once you finish presenting a very good intro, then I will cogitate about the body paragraphs. I want you to focus on how to develop good sentences. Therefore, I suggest reading sample answer as many as you can. This helps you improve your vocabularies, sentence structure and ideas related to IELTS topics. A heap of luck :D


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