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'Computer in the future has no limits' - What will Happen in the Future


mishal alzaid 5 / 6  
Feb 2, 2012   #1
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What will Happen in the Future

Amid all this technological development that we are witnessing today, what can you expect to happen in the future?
I saw a wonderful video on YouTube in our class "UNIV 112", explain the new invention for a American student. The invention is a small device attached around the neck in a series and online wireless with mobile. This device is provide with a small camera and small project. The profit of this device is that the device capture the image of anything front of you and immediately related to the Internet and looking for information on what has been captured then provide to you immediately and displays the result by a small projector front of you. Something wonderful and amazing, we are now in 2011 and have reached to all this development and has become an almost daily, so what can happen after 100 years.

Computer in the future has no limits, they see a light weight you can carry wherever you go, has a screen of the liquid crystal shows all the information required, and can run this computer with the left hand or right hand, and will be programmed by the human voice, and would also request information by voice, and this computer is characterized by high ability to store huge number of information and retrieval in a jiffy, because of the use of sophisticated electronic chips. Housing in the future will be floating on the water in the middle of the ocean, and have the power plants and fuel for such housing, and will be the glass is the basic material for the construction of housing in the future, even allowed to enter the largest amount of the sun to take advantage of the energy.

I sat thinking in the future and how it can be a life after 100 years. I imagined the car flying in the air and traffic lights above the skyscrapers and the policeman wearing a fly shoes. I imagined the children go to school by school bus flying and they learn how to program the robot to any function of it Required. I imagined the shops have changed and everything has become automatic. Clothing stores do not have clothes, but they have large screens showing all the clothes in the store, you only need to touch anything you like. I imagined the grocery store has a robot can encapsulates everything automatically and bake a bread in a few seconds and clean the place with amazing speed. Also, I imagined that travel between countries more easily by airplanes like a space ships instead of the airplanes. When we get the plane we find our self after 5 minutes in Saudi Arabia or Europe or in the United States. You may also visit the whole world in half an hour. I imagined the future houses, which working automatically. Coffee is prepared by the robot and the TV is a small device picks up all channels and displays them on the wall like cinema.

I imagined that the world is after all this development could easily be back to nothing, and that begins with the new. I realized that if we cannot control this enormous development and did not use it properly can be the cause of our destruction.
Jennyflower81 - / 690 96  
Feb 2, 2012   #2
Amid all of the technological development that we are witnessing today, what can we expect to happen in the future?

I saw a wonderful video on YouTube in our class "UNIV 112", that explained a new invention for a American students . The invention is a small device that attaches around the neck in a series and has online wireless with mobile. Provided with this device is provide with a small camera and a small project. The profitbenefits of this device isare that the deviceit can capture the image of anything.front of you andIt will immediately relay to the Internet and lookingsearch for information on what has been capturedthe picture, then provide to youit immediately and displays the result byon a small projector front of you. SomethingIt is wonderful and amazing; we are now in 2011 and have reached to all of this development and has become an almost daily occurance , so imagine what could happen after 100 years.

I edited the first paragraph for you, to make it easier to read. Try to be less "wordy" when you write, keep it simple and you will be fine! Continue to check your grammar. :)


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