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Computer will replace teachers. Do you agree or disagree?

Feb 23, 2012   #1
As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years the expansion of information technology has made the idea of virtual classroom much more practical. Although, the computers are extremely useful for the students, they cannot completely replace the teachers.

Undoubtedly, there are a number of positive aspects to the virtualization of classrooms. One such aspect is how the computers generally make it quick and easy to acquire a particular piece of information. For example, a teacher looking for specific section from a law book can take ages to find it in comparison to a laptop. Additionally, the computers are perfect and do not make mistakes whereas human beings could sometimes be impeccable. Moreover, computers deliver the same quality of education at any time of the day.

On the other hand, the presence of a teacher in a classroom is exceptionally important due to several reasons. Firstly, teachers can share their personal experiences in order to provide better understanding of a particular phenomenon. Secondly, everyone does not have the quick earning ability in all areas of study. Mathematics, for instance, is an easiest subject for some while nightmare for others. A teacher can adjust their pace according to children's capabilities. Lastly and most importantly, teachers can provide invaluable feedback and advise to their students, which play a significant role in their career development.

To sum up, I strongly believe that, even though the computers have become an essential part of education system in almost all the countries, it cannot replace the teachers. Pupils would always need a mentor to shape their career.

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Feb 24, 2012   #2
Computers can be effective tools for helping students learn academic subjects, but young people will always need human teachers to provide moral guidance and foster intellectual growth and social development. Computers provide students with information, but only teachers can teach children to think critically, discriminate among sources of information, and be creative.

a little bit more to support your argument!!!
in agreement disagreement essays you should write only your opinion, in the other words, you should completely agree with the statement or disagree. that is why you should change the first body paragraph
Mar 18, 2012   #5
Only write one side of the argument, so you should change it around so that your argument only disagrees with the question that is provided as that is how you finish it off

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