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IELTS; As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role


fahadbd 25 / 56 5  
Oct 10, 2013   #1
Discussion essay;
As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.


In recent years, Computers have brought wide varieties of convenience in the field of education. The majority of the universities and colleges are using computer in needs of education. The advancement of education fairly depends on computers for both teachers and students. However, the arguments have come up about the excessive use of computer for educational activities which might die out the roles of teachers in the classroom. But i doubt in given statement due to the several reasons.

There is no double that computer is being used widely for the purpose of education. Students are being taught by introducing digital computer in the classroom. Each student has a personal laptop where they have a chance to store substantial educational materials. They have an access to download academic lessons, course materials and useful software via internet. For example, teachers serves students only 40 to 1 hours in the classroom but they are failed to demonstrate lessons to all the students. In this case, many students do not understand the lessons properly, they must have to rely on internet materials.

In addition, computer is a common tool for the students. They can easily bear it with them. Many people would argue that thrilling computer may decrease the relationship between teachers and students. It might lose of our traditional educational system. For example, we are forgetting manual counting process and hand writing once a computer is available.

To sum up, teachers experience is certainly required to guide and assist the students in understanding lessons. It is obviously true teachers help and computer based education must be corresponded to each other in current education.

dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
Oct 10, 2013   #2
However, the arguments have come up about the excessive use of computer for educational activities which might die out the roles of teachers in the classroom.

.... the first part is fine, but there are grammar issues with the latter part;
However, the arguments have come up about the excessive use of computer for educational activities may lead to less significance a natural death of the role of teachers in classroom setup.

But i doubt in given statement due to the several reasons.

This is also not very clear. You need to state your position clearly before concluding the introduction;
However, I do not agree with idea.
Pahan 1 / 1,907 553  
Oct 10, 2013   #3
There is no double that computer is being used widely for the purpose of education. Students are being taught by introducing digital computer in the classroom. Each student has a personal laptop where they have a chance to store substantial educational materials.

What is the reason you try to tell that can justify your position stated in the introduction? I guess the reason here is that computer aids students with many sophisticated and convenient solutions in their learning process. So, start with this reason and then talk about laptops, digital computers etc. as examples to support your reason.


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