hellooo yuuriiiii
yuri, i think that you should attach your figure owing to the fact that other people do not know about data that you mean
The charts illustrate ...
you mention percentage twice. i think you do not need to do it.
... the percentage of happiness ratings based
on the number of peoplethe age and the
percentage of the effect
of thefor children who the marital ...
... at 45 percent in young age,
between 18 and 29 years old [
in ielts writing task 1, you do not to go detail) , and also (...) over medium,
50 to 64 years old .