Well... I provided you with my comments on the other essay in the new thread and hope it is helpful :)
Ok... now that you uploaded the table and it provides a good idea as to what you should write for your answer. :)
The table below shows the
level of possessing tospread of consumer durables in Britain from 1972 to 1983.
.... In statistical presentations, especially you deal with tables "spread" is a commonly used key word. With graphs you use the key words "trend", "pattern" and "distribution" more. With pie charts "distribution" is a more commonly used key word :)
If we pay attention to the table,we can see obviously growth inclination in the amount of having consumer durables.In the table having central heating indicator has consistently increased from 37 % in 1972 to 64% in 1983.Similarly,to own to TV level has gone up but rather slowly,from 93% to 98%.A sharp increase in every consumer durable can be observed from 1972 to 1983
.... In this type of task, you may use passive tense extensively. Also you have to write to the point and should avoid many details.
Similarly,to own to TV level has gone up but rather slowly,from 93% to 98%.In comparison with other consumer durables having TV level has been the highest in 1972,however it has rather slowly increased and shown stabilities on years.
Avoid writing long sentences like this. Since you are talking with figures it is very difficult to keep memorizing your figures :)Central heating records the highest growth in consumer durables ownership while TVs and Vacuum cleaners show the lowest growth of 5% during the period of review.