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How can we control traffic jams? Flying cars?


ralph01 2 / 4  
Apr 14, 2011   #1
**I was told to make a three paragraph essay based on my opinion.**

How can we control traffic jams in today's over populated cities? Sometimes it can take much longer than expected to your destination due to long lines caused by traffic jams. It seems like each year there are more cars on the street, because of over populating cities and more teenagers learning hot to drive. By taking into account today's technology and research on traffic, traffic problems are becoming a thing of the past.

There are so many ways to prevent and understand how traffic accumulates. Today's technology is filled with ways to help one get to his destination with ease. Widgets are helpful to download maps onto your computer to get a better understanding on how traffic is in your area. They can also be installed onto your G.P.S if you have one in your car. Software developers drive into traffic jams just like us. They have developed lots of widgets, gadgets and browser add-ons. This has helped drivers move along faster for many years and keeps on improving through time. Carpooling has become more advanced in some countries over the years. It is no longer your friends or coworkers any more. In Germany and even in India they have developed webpages that let you look for a ride in exchange for paying for half the gas it costs to get to your destination. You can even offer a ride to someone to make your trip cost less.

Controlling traffic is a very deep matter and will take many years to fix. When I see most inventions in movies come to reality one way or another, I think I'll see flying cars come to town to make our transportation much faster!

Real Fog 5 / 26  
Apr 14, 2011   #2
It seems like each year there are more cars on the streets , because of over populated cities and more teenagers learning hot to drive.

Widgets are helpful to download maps onto your computer to get a better understanding on how traffic is in your area (verb is missing)

It is no longer your friends or co-workers any more. In Germany and even in India they have developed web pages that let you look for a ride in exchange for paying for half the gas it costs to get to your destination.

I feel it is a bit out of topic. But the grammar and lexical resources are good enough. Happy writing
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,335 129  
Apr 16, 2011   #3
Flying cars, good idea!

How can we control traffic jams in today's over populated cities? Sometimes it can take much longer than expected to travel to your destination due to long lines ...

Use "overpopulated" instead of overpopulating-----> ...because of over populating overpopulated cities and more teenagers learning hot how to drive.

Controlling traffic is a very deep matter and will take many years to fix.--I think you used this sentence twice. Only use it once.

Also, you can make your last paragraph a little longer. I think you did a good job expressing the main idea: technology and other innovations will improve the situation.

:-)


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