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The controversial of Trump was elected as USA president


hitam_manis 3 / 5 1  
Nov 10, 2016   #1
Donald trump becomes a polemic after winning the election of the president in the USA. All of the politicians got stunning when they heard related to the decision of the election. Donald Trump becomes controversy after he proclaimed to against Moslem and spoke rudely in the campaign. According to economist.com said, Donald trump has won the election because their parties (republican and independent) were voting trump to become president that peaked at more or less 85 % compared to Clinton was supported by democratic that just peaked at 23%. The other reasons. All of the white people voted trump due to the fact that Trump will uplift the white people.
ryan31 65 / 96 15  
Nov 10, 2016   #2
hello hitam manis
I think it is a good summary
but let me give you some advice
hope it works

1. you should input the address of the website that you visited
2. repetition of the name of 'Trump'


According to economist.com said , Donald trump has won (...) president that was peaked at more or less 85 % compared to Clinton who was supported by democratic that justwhich havepeaked at roughly 23%.

The other reasons.(without dot) all of the white (...) the fact that Trump he will be uplift themwhite people.

thanks


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