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Cooking - Activity done for the pleasure

amanjain14 1 / -  
Dec 8, 2011   #1
MIT essay .. Activity done for the pleasure of it .. (100 words or fewer) .. i know it over word limit .. but i need help in that segment too !!

Cooking , is one such pleasurable activity , which not only helps my brain to show its creative side but also allows me have a free hand over trying new or more precisely.It not only helps me to accept the unexpected in the form of burnt food,but to take greater risk than written in any book. I find cooking an integral and intrigue part of me which has helped me to develop a "think out of the box" logic with my dishes and in my life . Acc. to me ,cooking is a beautiful amalgamation of the science of balancing different flavors , finding complementary partners and and try to exist a medley within all of its components , and the art of playing with colors and method of presentation so that it blends in the fragrance and melts in the eyes before of the taster
mursel 6 / 12  
Dec 8, 2011   #2
have a free replace to be free
It is not only you forgot to write
Acc. replace according to me

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