Economic improvementboost country's growth in all sectors.
boosts -singular.
For example, Information Technology professional who working for more hours to meet his deadlines in his project loses his family members at dinner and arrive late at late night which effects the family relation.
which effects the family relation this part is unnecessary because it doesn't add any information.
Attracts overseas skilled professionals to get high pay.
Maybe
"Attraction" if you wanted to write a noun, or if not, you need subject, because without it is sentence fragment. You could do it like this:
"It attracts overseas skilled professionals to get high pay"To conclude, by analyzing boththeviews.
Plural noun.
high pay jobis pivotal.
High pay job
are pivotal .
with in
withinA lot of mistakes,you should improve your grammar.