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The overriding theme of both texts
There is a certain point in the discussion of these texts where the focuses diverge. Do not overlook the separation points of the text as these differences have an effect on the overall presentation as well. These must also be considered when reviewing the information for your evaluation.
Apps and website
Start this part with "I believe that..." since this is the part of the review that represents your opinion explanation in relation to your belief in the given discussion.
interact with their phones
Rather, people have the urge to continously check if there are others interacting with them socially via their phones. This leads to their constant checking of the gadget. Your explanation was a bit incorrect in this part.