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IELTS TASK I : US Crude Oil Imports (15 countries)


SHanafi 120 / 415 93  
Mar 19, 2014   #1
The table compares fifteen countries in the field of overall number of imports crude oil per day in US from 2007 to 2008.

Overall, all mentioned features of US crude oil imports varied markedly. While US energy information administration accounted Canada as the highest exporter, Azerbaijan was noted as the least crude oil exporter in a-two year statistic.

Turning to the details, in 2007, 116 thousand barrels of USA crude oil imported from Azerbaijan while Saudi Arabia, Mexico, Venezuela and Nigeria supplied US crude oil by more than 1100 thousand barrels. Standing in contrast with Kuwait and Chad, the seven others countries exported crude oil by under 550 thousand barrels per day, then under 200 thousand barrels US crude oil came from Kuwait and Chad.

A more detailed look at the table compares that the overall imports in numbers was not always similar. Between June and July 2008, Iraq coming sixth county exporter reached to approximately 700 thousand barrels crude oil each month. However, the nine countries exports crude oil in a range of 107 to 640 thousand barrels towards US.




Bob brother 15 / 22  
Mar 20, 2014   #2
The table compares fifteen countries in the field of overall number of imports crude oil per day in US from 2007 to 2008. The table compares below yearly statistical informtion about every day crude oil imports to United State from top different fifteen counties
dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
Mar 20, 2014   #3
The table comparesillustrates the details offifteen countries in the field of overall number of importscrude oil importation from 15 countries per day inby the US from 2007 to 2008

Table presents you details or statistics and you are supposed to compare and analyse them.

Overall, all mentioned features of US crude oil imports varied markedly. While US energy information administration accounted Canada as the highest exporter, Azerbaijan was noted as the least crude oil exporter in a-two year statistic.

Try to give a very obvious observation;
Overall, Canada had been the biggest supplier of crude oil to the US while Saudi Arabia and Mexico secured the second and third positions in US crude oil imports.
Pahan 1 / 1,906 553  
Mar 20, 2014   #4
A more detailed look at the table comparesshows that the overall imports in numbers was not always similar. Between June and July 2008, Iraq comingcame up as the sixth largest oil exporter to the US by exportingcounty exporter reached to approximately 700 thousand barrels crude oil each month. However, the The nine countries exportsexported crude oil in a range of 107 to 640 thousand barrels towards US.
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,208 476  
May 24, 2014   #5
approximately 1900 thousand barrels crude oil in US was come from Canada from 2007 to 2008

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It followed by Saudi Arabia and Mexico as the second and the third highest oil supplier for US country.

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the nine countries exports

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by under 200 thousand barrels

less than 200 thousand barrels

Canada had beenwas recorded as the biggest supplier
OP SHanafi 120 / 415 93  
Jun 4, 2014   #6
approximately 1900 thousand barrels crude oil in US was comecame from Canada from 2007 to 2008

It was followed by Saudi Arabia and Mexico as the second and the third highest oil supplier for US country.

the nine countries exports


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