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IELTS TASK 1 The data of consumer disbursing on several different items in European Countries


nelarizka79 16 / 21 1  
Mar 14, 2016   #1
The table provides the data of consumer disbursing on several different items in five different European countries in 2002. Briefly, there are two bold data. First, Turkey had the highest number of consumer spending on both food and education, while it was on the second for clothing. Second, the consumers in Italy mainly spent for clothing, but it has slightly lower spending for both food and education.

In Turkey, 32.4% of consumers pay out for food in which it was the highest percentage out of five countries. For education sector, Turkey was also on the top level of percentage, reaching 4.35%, compared to the others country. Otherwise, it had slightly lower disbursing for clothing where it was 6.63%, the second level after Italy.

In contrast, the consumers in Italy tended to spend their money for clothing than two other items. It showed 9.00%, while other countries just got lower than 7.00%. Then, Italy had about a half of the Turkey's percentage for food and followed the Sweden on 3.20%.

Finally, other three countries, Sweden, Spain, and Ireland, are in the middle. Those are under 20% for food except Ireland which got 28.91%. In addition, Sweden had the highest percentage among these countries for education with 3.22% followed by Ireland and Spain at 2.21% and 1.98%.




Desty22 13 / 20 1  
Mar 14, 2016   #2
Hi Nela, it's better to change to be with verb II, to make some variations in your writing

Example :
First, Turkey had the highestshowed highest number of consumer spending ...

Second, the consumers in Italy mainly spent for clothing, but it haswitnessed slightly lower spending
RAY93 35 / 186 136  
Mar 22, 2016   #3
hy RIZKA, here my comment. check it, i may wrong. thanks

The table provides the data of consumer disbursing on several different items in five different European countries in 2002. Briefly, there are two bold data. First, Turkey [...] lower spending for both food and education.

try to use various words
briefly write the overview


In Turkey, 32.4% of consumers pay out --> stick to the proper tenses, since it occured in 2002, so use past tense
where it was AT 6.63%,


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