I personally believe that people nowadays would rather have child as late as possible due to career or other personal considerations
as will now be discussed .
Good introduction :)
Traditionally, the mother's role Traditional concept of motherhood means that she should devote most of her time taking care of her children.
of the child hashad been to devote most of her time to taking care of her daughter or son.
they can take the advantage of this time to get promotions in their careers.
Moreover, some believe that child education is not an easy task.
... when you say "child education", it sort of distracts the reader letting them feel that you are talking about the education of children. This is how I suggest;Moreover, some believe that raising a child is not an easy task.
Overall a very good essay; good structure, good sentences, good vocabulary :)