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TOEFL:Decision can be made quickly


djanat 19 / 29  
Mar 18, 2010   #1
i plan to take the toefl , so please give me your opinion.thanks.

Decisions can be made quickly, or they can be made after careful thought. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.

Almost people in their daily lives have to take some decisions. Some of these decisions are taken quickly. Others need to take more time to be made. Personally, I think that decisions that people make quickly are not always wrong. Being limited by the time can not always affect us to make the wrong decision because there are other reasons that have a huge impact on this.

First of all, there are a lot of decisions that we have to make repeatedly in our life. Why take more time and more energy to think about some thing we have gone through it before. May be the waste of time can costs us a lot. My best friend always told me that I have to beat the fir when it is hot. Never wait to make a decision, because it will be too late.

Also, there are a lot of sophisticated persons who can predict the right decision. Their knowledge and their experiences give them the ability to make the right decision in a short time. They do not need to think a lot or ask for the help. For example, the decisions made by a teacher are not always wrong if it concerns one of their students. Because the teacher is more aware about their students' issues and concerns, so they can make the right decision quickly.

Moreover, some decisions have a relation with the luck. Even a person takes all their time to think in order to make the right decision, they fail because they are not lucky. Then, we can say that most of time a wrong decision has a relation with the luck, not with the time that we take to decide.

Some people believe that the decision that people make is always wrong because they do not dispose all the data about what they have to decide. I think that some times the lot of information can distort the facts, so we have just to think intelligently.

It is important to take decisions in our lives, even if there are wrong. We can think or ask for advice but never let another person makes the decision for us, because they will try to control and manipulate us all our lives.

EF_Kevin 8 / 13,334 129  
Mar 19, 2010   #2
We have to take make decisions. "make"

Almost all people have to make some decisions in their daily lives. have to take some decisions. Some of these decisions are taken made quickly. Others need to take more time to be made. Personally, I think that decisions that people make quickly are not always wrong. Being limited by the time cannot always cause us to make the wrong decision, because there are other reasons that have a huge impact on this process .

My best friend always told me that I have to beat the fire when it is hot. (Bob Marley says, "Strike the hammer while the fire is hot.")

Never wait to make a decision, because it will be too late.--- this is wise sometimes!

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Some people believe that the decisions that people make quickly are always wrong, because ...

It is important to make decisions in our lives, even if they are wrong.

We can think or ask for advice but never let another person makes the decision for us, because they will try to control and manipulate us all our lives.--- this is a well-constructed sentence!!


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