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Decisions can be made quickly, or they can be made after careful thought?


NasteaMischevca 1 / -  
Jul 15, 2018   #1

Every day we do different decisions that change us and our life.



First of all I want to say that we do big decision that leaves a footprint on our life and also do small decisions that are not so important.I think that this small decisions we can do quickly because it don't change very much our life.For example:to decide what to eat on the diner or to decide what to do now.

I personally believe that big decisions we should made after careful thought because it can do our life different and after doing this decisions we should think about pluses or minuses and decide.For example:to decide in what country you will study or to decide where to live.I think that if we will do this decisions quickly,before it we can regret about our decision and this is not so good.

To sum up I want to say that we should do the decisions with attention and do only the decision that we want but not someone else.Every decision have different consequences.

Holt - / 7,528 2001  
Jul 16, 2018   #2
Anastasia, your grammar is not perfect and your timeline in the presentation is off. However, you still managed to make yourself understood with very little stress applied on the reader in order to understand your point of the meaning of your statement. You need to make sure that you focus on your tense usage though as this thoroughly affects the method by which you present your discussion. All of these statements should be made with future participles in mind so the more proper grammar presentation would have been:

... MAKE big decisions... footprint IN our LIVES ( when you start with a plural presentation, you end with a plural presentation)... also MAKING small DECISIONS are... that THESE small decisions... it DOES NOT change... much IN our LIVES... what to eat FOR DINNER...

... BIG DECISIONS SHOULD BE MADE... because it can AFFECT our LIVES DIFFERENTLY... ... we will MAKE THESE DECISIONS QUICKLY...

You can see the pattern for correcting the rest of the essay based on the sample above. Remember, when something is yet to be done, use the future tense references and watch out for those tricky plural references.


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