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Both deforestation and global warming are very important issues of human beings in today's world.


alfa7 19 / 26 1  
Oct 27, 2016   #1
question:

While some people consider Global Warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we at the moment, others believe that deforestation as more devastating impact on our world.

discuss both sides and give your opinion.


This world gets old with responsibility to face the problem in today's era. There are lot of problem running around in our daily life, especially in environment sector. Some people in this world think that global warming is the crucial problem and other the rest of the world say removing forest from large area or as we know that is deforestation is more urgent. My standpoint is both global warming and deforestation are an urgent problem we should tackle.

Global warming is effect from producing of carbon dioxide and myriad of harmful fumes are increasing by human activities. Accordingly, global warming affects the atmosphere to shield less us from radiation of sunlight in our ozone. It increases of The Earth temperature more warm than usual; with high warmth of the Earth is very harm to array of species and habitat of them to adapt with this situation.

Furthermore, deforestation is not less crucial than global warming. It creates losing of habitat of myriad genus of flora and fauna in forest. Mostly deforestation comes from illegal logging and burning, thanks to human will. Deforestation makes production of good gasses are less and destroying of ozone is rapidly happen.

Both of deforestation and global warming are urgent business of human being in today's world. Pick of them which more important than other is wasting time. My standpoint is entire of human being today should tackle this problem rapidly before we are late. We should not be skeptic person to compare one of them, both of them are a major-league point of problem today. Let us make a brand better future for our next generation with contribute to solve these problems.
Yonathan 46 / 65 5  
Oct 27, 2016   #2
Hi alfa
Let me give you some correction

This world gets old with(a) responsibility to face the problem in today's(this) era. There are a lot of problem ...
... world say removing forest fromin large area or ...

Global warming is an effect from producing of carbon dioxide and (...) fumes which are increasingincreased by human activities.
... affects the atmosphere toas a shield less us from ...
It increases ofoff The Earth temperature more (...) Earth is very harm to arrayfor a lot of species and habitat of them in order to adapt ...

... of habitat of myriad genusspecies of flora and fauna in the forest.

We should not be skeptic sceptic person to compare one ...
... generation with contribute to solvesolving these problems.

Thank you...
Mathew8 5 / 12  
Oct 27, 2016   #3
Hello Alfa7
there are some advice to you, pay attention if you wish

There are lot of problem(s) running around in our daily life
....you have to write problem with s because you use there are that give indication with plural subject, and you use a lot of that have meaning large number

Global warming is effect from producing of carbon dioxide ...
.........the collocation of effect is on/of , so you should change from with on/of

It increases of The Earth temperature ...
.....you no need to use preposition (of)


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