Hi Huynh Anh. your explanation is good and interesting either. here is my suggestion for you
... (AI) is coming
(it will be good if you can give an easy explanation about AI) .
... replacing people doing some works
[If you refer to the activity, it should be uncountable noun] .
... any skill or experience as
the human, it still completes everything
very good even better than people.
... reduce employees' payment so they
can invest in some hi-tech ...
... for booking goods through
the internet or buying online so
they do not need salesclerks for
makemaking appointment, receiving customers' requirements and
placeplacing for distribution.
missing subject here... for employees' salary
, but also save time for customers'
purchasingpurchase and lessen unwanted mistake.
... lost because of the
replacing automatic answer machine. This
replacing will give customers better ...
... answer system will be
programedprogrammed with very interested and light ...
... to people calling to the
Cc all center because of ...
In overall, the
replacingreplacement of technology in our life ...
In the near future, there
isare not many position
s for
working people
working because of reducing (...) company
leadsleading to the results of competition ...
It
iswill bevery good if we use hi- tech equipment in ...
Goodluck and keep spirited!
Work or Job?