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Describe the table in task 1, about television viewing figures


lequy1209 2 / 1  
Aug 25, 2022   #1

numbers of sports watched in the tv



The table shows how many people in millions watch sports on television. It shows the number of viewers for 4 sports by 4 countries
America has biggest viewers in A countries with 25.2 millions. Tennis is more popular than other 3 sports: golf, motor racing, Athletics. Motor racing is not popular because only 12.7 millions people watch it. However, In Britain the number of people watch motor racing reach 6.4 million, account for more 50 percentage of viewer for motor racing. Golf is also popular: There are $11.2 millions viewer in America but it is not as popular in the other countries. There are 16.9 viewer who watch Athetics and it is quite same in 4 countries.


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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 14,801 4780  
Aug 25, 2022   #2
Try to avoid underwriting words in the task 1 essay. Be mindful of the 150 minimum and 200 maximum word count. Any less, such as this 117 word count essay will cause an automatic failing score based on the word count percentage deduction. Failing the word count is a guaranteed way to not pass the test.

Learn to provide the correct member of paragraphs based on the number of images provided. 3 paragraphs for a single image and up to 4 paragraphs for 2 or more images. A task 1 essay cannot be composed of 1 compressed paragraph alone.

I find it best not to review this for content at the moment. There is no sense in doing that since there are already 2 task related reasons for the exam taker to fail. Write a proper essay next time. Then I will give a relevant review of the analysis presentation.


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