After three right turns, I return to my flat.
After turning right at the traffic lights, I can see a large fitness center that is pretty famous in my city. Then turn right again, as i walk, I can see a large building of China Bank. After the last right turn, I can see a large Japanese restaurant. After walking for about 100 meters, I am back to home.
EF_Kevin, thanks a lot for your corrections.
However, I just feel that this essay seems way too stupid.
Acutally, it is for a topic in IELTS speaking test. I just wanna prepare it in advance.
However, my regular walking is indeed like this, just like walking in a rectangular way.
You know, start walking from the starting point then then back to the starting point. However, i have no idea to decribe it in a more logicall way.
As I mentioned in the passage, it sounds like a elmentary school student are writing a diary.
I want my essay to be more elegant.
Could you help me?