I desire a farm house and natural atmosphere - "upside and downside of living in countryside"

The vast majority of rural areas have been rapidly replaced by cites, industrial parks, ... in the last few years, this has caused the dramatic increases in the number of people migrating to cities . In today's world, life in countryside, without honking, air pollution,... is considered as the greatest way to live by some people, while some other people claim that living in countryside does have drawbacks.

Open spaces, fresh air and less pollution are some benefits of living in countryside. Space is at a premium in urban areas which may not be the problems in countryside. House with a large garden and trees galore is not a strange thing in countryside. Obviously, natural atmosphere may healthily impact on people. People' health can also be protected by the friendly environment in rural areas. Unpolluted water, fresh air strengthening environment do keep everything in a well-balanced way.

On the other side, the downside of living in countryside may refer to education and job opportunities. The quality of education in countryside is considered to be lower than in city. Facilities, studying condition may not be well-developed, the urgent problem any governments have to face. In addition, it seems harder to find a job with appropriate salary in countryside where agriculture is the main method for earning money.

In my opinion, I prefer living in countryside to living in cities despite it's disadvantages. Should I get older, I desire a farm house in countryside; however, when young, I must try my best in my career, may be in a big city.

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is this an agree or disagree topic? if so, please add your opinion at the end of the intrduction. btw, the phrase "in the today's world" is not appropriate to be used in this sentence cause it is usually used when you are trying to talk about a worldwide FACT not two different viewpoints of two groups of people.


This cannot be a topic sentence. In a topic sentence u need to mention a general idea and a precise idea. General idea could be "living in countryside", and precise idea "some advantages". Talking about advantages must be included in the following supporting sentence.


Conclusion structure--> reword thesis statement/topic+your opinion if the topic is not agree or disagree; if it is, you need to write your opinion in the introduction+a clincher

hope this helps

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