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Devastating Consequences of Logging


WasishaSisha 16 / 20  
Oct 10, 2016   #1
Logging industry makes several decays such living environment destruction, pollution, and clime change. Like terrene creatures, aquatic creatures are becoming extinct by deforestation. Trees shade all organism on the ground underneath their strong parts of body. The canopy of branches and leaves avoid superficies runoff by retard heavy rainfall, thus the water could not fall to the earth directly. Roots of the trees could stabilize the soil and help to avoid attrition. Symbiotic mutualism occurs when well ground boost root growth and microbe activity that help the trees grow well.

Aquatic habitats can be damaged by logging as well. Falling ground and other residue can be intercepted by vegetation along stream. The eroding earth which containing organic things can drain more oxygen. It makes fish and other animals killed due to decimation oxygen.

Trees become natural defenses of pollution in the air. The leaves of trees filtering pollutants from air and also get rid of carbon dioxide from the atmosphere. If the carbon dioxide airborne, which they can alloy with acid rain and water vapour, it will be generate quality of water round streams and along of river. In healthy forest ecosystem, trees protect to mitigate evaporation when they dragging haze from the ground into the atmosphere. Moreover, deforestation sway rainfall scheme and it leads to severe flooding and forest fires. Logging is an enormous actor behind global warming. In short, responsible logging over tropical rainforests would preserve next generations.

Asma Raj 6 / 10  
Oct 10, 2016   #2
Hello Washisa,
I would like to give some correction on your essay.

1. This sentence should be " The eroding earth which is containing organic ...".
2. This sentence "If the carbon dioxide airborne..." should be "If the carbon dioxide mix with acid rain and water vapour, it will be generate quality of water round streams and along of river".

3. This sentence "Logging is an enormous ..." should be "It is an enormous actor behind global warming".
Explanation: You have mentioned logging in the first paragraph on your essay, so you have to substitute 'logging' in the last of your essay being 'it'.

Keep writing Washisa :)
ryan31 65 / 96 15  
Oct 10, 2016   #3
Hai asma
it is a great essay
I have several suggestions for you
hope it helps

Logging industry makes several decays such as living environment destruction, pollution, and climeclimate change.

... underneath their strong parts of the body.
The canopy of branches and leaves
the branches and leaves of canopy

Falling ground and other residueS can be (...) along THE stream.

... it will be generate quality of water A round streams ...

In THE healthy forest ecosystem, ...
Moreover, deforestation swayS rainfall scheme and it leads ...
Logging is an enormous F actor behind global warming.

thanks


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