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IELTS TASK I: the diagram illustrates the operation of automatic photo both for passport


fardan10 18 / 25 1  
Apr 5, 2016   #1
The presented diagram illustrates about the operation of automatic photo both for passport. Overall, there are two kinds of picture can be produced, those are large format and passport-sized photos.

To start with, this technology consists of several equipments. In the inside, there is adjustable stool in order to arrange the position precise to the eye level. And then, a mirror is utilised to ceck our appearence before capturing picture. In that process, the curtain must be closed. While outside the room, there a slot to input the coins to operate the printing machine.

The first process of this stage is taking picture in the room which is closed by curtain. Yet before that, it is required to enter choins. Following that, the picture will be printed in 1 large format or 4 passport-sized photos. Just below the slot coin there are two buttons to choose both colour photo or black & white, in which for passport photos. After waiting for 60 second the photos will be delivered.

justivy03 - / 2,367 607  
Apr 5, 2016   #2
Hi Fardan, you forgot to post the diagram, anyway, as this is crucial to the analysis, you can add it on the final revision and for future writing reference, when you refer the information gathered from a diagram, the diagram has to be visible as this is where the facts and figures can be cross checked.

Moving forward, kindly find my remarks below;

- about the operation
- of an automatic photo
- picture that can be

- In the inside, there isOne side has an ( this - is for things that are near you and one that you can touch and present to the crowd )

- position, precisely atto the eye level.
- And thenThen , a mirror is
- capturing a picture.
- In thatthe process,

- it is required to enter choinssome change onto the slot provided .
- the coin slot coin there are
- two buttons to choose, ( mind the minor details, punctuation marks )
- white, in which are for passport photos.

There you have it Fardan, I hope the corrections above are helpful.


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