The diagram presents six stages in the life cycle of the honey bee (the diagram is on the internet)

The given diagram expresses the development of honey bee in life.

In general, there are 6 stages in the life cycle of the honey bee and it takes 34 -36 days for this process.

As can be seen, the first stage of bee's development is egg hatching, this takes 9-10 days to complete. The first five days, the egg becomes split because of the effect of a bee to come out. After 2 days, the bee can come out from the egg completely and grow while the next 2 days. Then it becomes young adult emerges and take 4 days to maturity. The females lay 1 or 2 eggs every 3 days and all of eggs make the life cycle again. This is a moderately complex process that helps increase amout of honey bee species.

The presentation does not meet the minimum word count of 150 words. This immediately disqualifies the writing from a passing score due to an underdeveloped analysis and data presentation. The expected 3 paragraph presentation format for the report was not followed. It should have a 3 sentence summary paragraph and 2 procedure or development paragraphs. There is a lack of proper development explanation and analysis that led to the lack of properly presented information. The report was completed in a rush and without consideration for the scoring requirements.

These are the most easily observed problems in the presentation. The lack of image prevents me from creating a more comprehensive review for work improvement suggestions.