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The diagrams describe how a turbine can produce electricity from renewable energy


irfan727 49 / 68 29  
Sep 16, 2015   #1
Task 1 IELTS - Design for a wind turbine and determining the location

The diagrams describe how a turbine can produce electricity from renewable energy, namely wind and where the most potential places to install the turbine. Uniquely, there are four main-parts can support that. Overall, it can be seen that the great places to put the machine is in the highest location.

To begin, turbine consists of steel tower, blades, generator and wind sensor. Steel tower has function to shore up all of the above equipment while the three blades which is made from fibreglass or wood. If there is wind, it can spin that. The next tool is wind sensor which aims to manage speed and direction. If the minimum limit of speed is fulfilled, the generator will gain output of electricity, but the amount of value depends on the wind velocity.

Regarding to the best position for installing a wind turbine, it can be spotted in the landscape, yet it is not optimal because of low wind flowing. This just generates 100 kilowatts of electricity, and another option is placed in the level of the sea. Meanwhile the height of the turbine is expected higher than in unspoiled terrain, the result still not optimum. However, the most fitting area to produce maximum electricity is in the plateau zone, where this is a place can be passed by maximum wind strengths and resulting 1.5 megawatts.




eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,195 459  
Sep 22, 2015   #2
As discussed in the previous post, I strongly suggest developing a 2-sentence overview. The overview presenting the general trend is the guideline to write body paragraphs. Here is my sample;

The two diagrams compare how wind turbines are designed and where they should be placed in. Overall, what stands out from the pictures shows that the two turbines are constructed with the combination of traditional and cutting-edge technologies. In any case, while some possible locations are offered differently, both turbines need a lot of wind to work.


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