The diagrams show how the bee makes honey, and the stages in the production of honey.

making honey process

The diagram illustrates the process of making honey. Overall, there are 7 stages in total, the process begins with the honey bees building a hive and ending with the honey is produced.

The first step, bees have a build hive and it consists of many small individually built cells made of wax lying close together. After the hive is completed, the bees leave the hive to search for flowers and then, they landed on the stamens to collect the nectar from it.

After the nectar is fully absorbed, the bees bring back the hive and they fill the cells with the nectar collected. However, this honey has not yet reached maturity. In addition, Some bees flap their wings to create wind to water evaporation in honey.

Finally, when the nectar reaches a certain degree of evaporation, the product produced is honey.

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