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A difference between tourism now and in the past.


Hong Na 1 / -  
Oct 15, 2016   #1
In the last century, travel is too hard with people. Now we can get to places that were once hard to reach, and I think this has changed people's experience.

In the past, tourists can find their own route to their destination, and this was part of their trip. When they got back home, they have many stories to tell.

Nowadays, big travel companies have many types of service to travelers. Sometimes they are transported from the airport to their hotel, where they stay for their vacation. I think they do not have the opportunity to meet local people and see real lanscape.

Another problem is that today's hotels have many tourist facilities. It is hard to find tourists who go out the resort. Although some visitor do, but they quickly go back to their hotel, where they feel comfortable.

This is very different from the past, when hotels were more basic and tourists have to find places to eat and beautiful places by themselves. In the past, I saw traveler who talked with local people to find where to eat and go in the streets. In my opinion, this was a good way to travel for everyone. Today, tourists can find places to eat and beautiful places via internet, so they do not have opportunity to meet local people and they do not have many experience about their adventure.

naelendra 6 / 10 3  
Oct 16, 2016   #2
Halo Hogna i will give you my opinion

... local people and see real lanscape ( landscape)

... and they do not have many experience ( Many experiences or much experience) about their adventure.
justivy03 - / 2,367 607  
Oct 16, 2016   #3
Hi Le, following your essay, I must say, indeed, the tourism industry has changed a lot, I remember, back in the day, I was happy to go to the carnival or when its time for them to visit our little town, my heart would go pounding as I know it will be a fun filled week, then my family ventured on a camping trip and that was just an amazing experience, years went by and as I grow up, we learned how to book our own airline tickets without the help of an agent and do our own itinerary with a few clicks online, this is just my take on the difference of tourism from then and now, indeed, it's a huge development and hopefully, everyone will be responsible to make good use of this development.

Now, enough of my inputs, please find a few suggestions below, to enhance your essay.

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There you have it Le, I hope the above remarks are helpful to your essay revision.
mem77 62 / 98 6  
Oct 22, 2016   #4
Hello hong na, this is some correction from me and feel free to correct me too!

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....and thisit was a part of their trip.

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