Difference between Two Close friends

In high school, I have two close friends but they are dissimilar at(this preposition doesn't seem to be a right one I think) characters and externality. They are Thao and Hang Ball ( Ball is the nickname). We are classmates and becominghave become close friends since we were in the 10th - grade. About externality, it is likely that Hang Ball is more beautiful than thou with white skin and black long hairHang Ball is usually appraised for her outstanding appearance (this sentence seems to be more suitable, depicting too detailed sounds...too detailed :-/ ) . But on the hand, Thao is a cute and lovely girl, who has blackswarthy skin and short hair sobut still impress people at first timemany people is impressed by her at first time . About characters, it is a big differenceHowever, there is a big difference in their characters . THAO was born and growngrew up in a village, so she is verya mischievous person . At school , she is a leader in group for person who prefer the girl to cry. Not until done our teacher meddle. Baiting everyone is her hobbies.she's infamous for her baiting-people hobby. Making girls cry until our teacher meddles seems to be her favorite things to doI felt comfortable and relax while I'm on the side here. But she is very lazyI'm not annoyed and feel totally comfortable with her hobby, it's harmless anyway. With her character, Thao is an easy-going person that she never does homework because of her intelligence . Sometime, I think she is likely Thao, Hang Ball is very feminine and hard - work studentHang Ball is also intelligent like Thao but she's likely to be a hard-work and feminine girl . So thatTherefore , in the end of the semester, Hang usually has a high GPA and she is given a scholarship. Because she was born in a poor family then no sooner has she finished the lesson at school than she went to her house and picked up her younger brother. Furthermore, Hang always understand me. When I have a challenge, Hang give me some useful advise(hey! this sentence should be put in the earlier part, isn't it?) . Although,But however different we are and wherever we come from , we are and will always be best friend forever.

In high school, I have two close friends but they are dissimilar at characters and externality.

We are classmates and becoming close friends at 10 - grade

Aboutexternality, it is likely that Hang Ball is more beautiful than thou Thou with white skin and black long hair.

She has black skin and short hair, so many people is impressed by her at first time. About characters, it is a big difference.

Thea was born and grown in a village, so she is very mischievous.

At school , she is a leader in group for person who prefer the girl to cry.

But she is very lazy. For example, she never does homework because of her intelligence .

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