Normally, this kind of writing would get an automatic failing score. You only wrote 227 out of 250 words, which means the preliminary score will receive appropriate percentage deductions based on the number of words lacking in relation to the minimum allowable word count. The essay will definitely start off with a failing score that the rest of the scoring considerations will have to overcome in order to garner a passing score. In this case, that may not be possible.
It is undeniably true
This is a false claim that should not be made in the prompt restatement. Please remember that there are 2 public opiunions being presented for the discussion topic. Therefore, nothing can be claimed as "undeniably true". This particular sentence should never be prsented in any discussion since it is not in compliance with the prompt restatement considerations. Only the next 2 sentences are actually needed for your prompt restatement + opinion presentation.
None of the reasoning paragraphs are properly presented. The format for this discussion must be as follows:
Sentence 1: Public opinion
Sentence 2: Reason for the public belief
Sentence 3: Writer's (dis)agreement with the given statement
Sentence 4: Writer's supporting reason based on a valid example
Sentence 5: Addiitonal explanation to support the example (if required or applicable)
This is the format that will guarantee that you meet all the scoring requirements from the word count up to the clarity of your opinion presentation. Your current presentation does not meet these requirements. This will be a failing test.