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Discussion: Free Trade and lack of capital, low standard products, and unskilled workers


Yonathan 46 / 65 5  
Oct 4, 2016   #1
The free movement of goods across national borders has long been a controversial issue. Some people argue that it is necessary for economic growth, while others claim that it damages local industries.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion


It becomes clear that free movement goods across national borders has become common in some countries. However, it becomes controversial because this act may cause damage to local industries. Many local industries have many issues like lack of capital, low standard products, and unskilled worker. If other countries send goods which are higher quality and cheaper the local industries will hard to compete and collapse. If the government do not calculate the advantages and drawbacks carefully the free trade will trigger economic fell.

In the other hand, the free trade also has several advantages if local industries are able to send local products to other countries. For example, the big local industries will send goods to other countries with just a little cost and have bigger merit. Otherwise, if a country decided to make a free trade among other countries surely because this act has several advantages than disadvantages for the home country. A free trade generally considered will increase economic growth and as a solution to overcome rarity of general good which caused inflation.

In my opinion, I agree if the free trade occurred because it is hard to increase economic growth if government always give much protection toward local industry. For example, many local industries never think their unique product will have a customer from other countries, and the free trade will enforce them to think in the bigger way. The free trade will make local industries more competitive and force them to improve their advantage. The free trade also allows local industries to think creatively.

In conclusions, I would agree that the advantages of free trade to other countries overweight the disadvantages.

Dioba 68 / 104 7  
Oct 4, 2016   #2
Hi Yonathan,after reading your summary, i have some suggestions, perhaps useful for you.
1. ... higher quality and cheaper than the local industries will ...
2. If the government (...) and drawbacks carefully ( dont forget put comma to make this sentence clearly ) the free trade will ...
3. wrong spelling grammar
think their unique products
local industry ----> local industries
Abrahamlincoln 54 / 56  
Oct 4, 2016   #3
Hello jojo
let me give you some advices

However, it becomes controversial because this act may ... >> (......) controversial or debatable issue because it might (....)

... many issues likesuch as lack of capital, low standard ...

if other countries send produce good which arehave higher quality withand cheaper price, the local industries will hardcomfort difficulties to compete and collapsein the market and finally they will be collapse.

If the government do not (...) the free trade will trigger economic fell. >>the free trade will be trigger to economical crisis.

... industries will send goods to other countries with just a little cost ... >> with more efficient production cost and they earn bigger profit

Keep writing
Abrahamlincoln 54 / 56  
Oct 5, 2016   #4
Hello Brother
let me give you some advices

it becomes controversial issue .

Many local industries have many issues >> many local industries comfort many problems such as

Unskilled workers

If other countries send goods which arehave

... will hard to compete and afterwards, collapse.

the free trade will enforce them to think >> the free trade will impose local industries to have creative and innovative mind.

Keep writing


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