Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit.
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The conflict between emotion and reason is always serious and has become the most difficult - to - solve problem.---maybe not the most. Maybe it has become a very difficult-to-solve problem.
In business, it appears more and more violent. What appears violent? You should say:
In business, emotions cause practices to be more and more ruthless.
In fact, many people support the ideas that businesses should do anything to make a profit. That sounds sensible because the nature of businesses is to create profit. --- very good! This is well-written.
However, I disagree with this point of view. _---me too!
To begin with, people who do business also have to care about ethical
and not just about making money.
Therefore, in addition to aim at profits, businesses also have to take other factors into consideration, especially ethical
In conclusion, I advocate the point of view that when making profits, businesses should also take many factors into account, such as ethics and environment. ---- this is another beautifully written sentence.