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Drawings that show the beauty and fragility of earth


grintdevereaux30 9 / 6 2  
Aug 11, 2016   #1
The urgency of climate change was the life target of Zaria Forman. As she got many experience, she can illustrate that situation by a unique way to convey the people, using art painting. She have started her work travel to Arctic, greenland and many place to capture the unfolding story of polar melt. Experts said that ice free in arctic can make the sea level rise between two and ten feet height in the worldwide in the last 2020. This situation can be equally endangered our planet.

Her drawing was explained moments of transition, turbulence and tranquility of the landscape of the ice crystall. Her mission is making the viewers feel the experience about the landscape, make them to be inspired and hopefully they can protect and preserve the earth by a message from the paintings. According to the behavioral physicology, An art can make impact to the viewer's emotions more effectively than a scary report from the news.

She has an ability to did this, due to the experience from her mother. She had always usually drawn the latitude in a huge drawing paper over 10 feet wide and she made it manually crayoning by her fingers in her own studio painting, at least in 250 hours. She draws and manipulate the pigment on the paper as a waves and graciers. While she is drawing it, she felt the power and fragility of iceberg alive with movement a sound so humbling, so she hope the viewers can imagine the same feeling. "My drawings celebrate the beauty of what we all stand to lose, I hope they can serve as records of sublime landscapes in flux", She closed the talks.

Summarized from TED Talks : Drawings that show the beauty and fragility of earth By Zaria Forman
payal1982 10 / 19 5  
Aug 11, 2016   #2
Here is my feedback:

As she got many experience, she can illustrate that situation by a unique way to convey the people, using art painting.Through her varied experience, she was able to illustrate. .... If you are using many experience has to be in plural.She havehas ]...has comes with single person, if the sentence starts with they, then have was appropirate ...started her work travel to Arctic, greenland and many place to capture the unfolding story of polar melt.

Her drawing was has explained moments of transition...
Her mission is making to make the viewers (...), make them to be inspired (...) by a message from the these paintings

She has an had the ability to did do this.....
While she is was drawing it,

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