Unanswered [4] | Urgent [0]
  

Home / Writing Feedback   % width Posts: 5

Economic growth is defined as an increase in the number of goods and services produced in one year


Altaa 11 / 22  
Nov 20, 2013   #1
Economic progress is one way to measure the success of a country. Some people think there are other factors. What other factors should be considered?

Economic growth is defined as an increase in the number of goods and services produced in an economy in one year. Therefore, many people argue that the nation's success is measured by its economic progress. However, I believe that there are many other factors to estimate country's success such as education level of nation, health care system, and country's infrastructure's development.

Education is one of vital factors to contribute to development of country. With highly educated, talented employees, companies could achieve more success by increasing their productivities. Employees, who gained good academic knowledge and educated well, would have more potentials to create new ideas to promote the productivity of a company than others who are not educated. Therefore, knowledge level of nation would be very important for country's growth of economics.

Also, health status of nation is another important factor of its development. If country has good medical service, as a result, people would be more healthy and happy which help them to work more productive.

A final but most important indicator which influences country's economic growth is its infrastructure's development. Highly developed infrastructure boosts the growth of economic progress. For example, well developed road chains enable companies to increase the distribution of finished products to markets, transportation of raw materials to factories and as a consequence, production and services produced by companies are increased. This ensures that the infrastructure is the vital factor of measurement of a country's success.

In summary, however, growth of economic is main factor which is estimates the success of a country, there are other important factors to measure its prosperity such as education and health status of nation, and development of country's infrastructure.
aoey 6 / 17 2  
Nov 20, 2013   #2
If country has good medical service, as a result, people would be more healthy and happy which help them to work more productive.
->I think it would be probably more common to use "healthier" than "more healthy".

In summary, however, growth of economic is main factor which is estimates the success of a country, there
-> In summary, however, the growth of economic is a main factor which is estimates the success of a country...
dumi 1 / 6,927 1592  
Nov 21, 2013   #3
Therefore, many people argue that the nation's success isshould be measured by its economic progress.
Education is one of vital factors to contribute to development of a country
With highly educated, talented employees, companies could achieve more success by increasing their productivitieslevel of productivity.
However, I believe that there are many other factors tohelp estimate country's success such as education level of nation, health care system, and country's infrastructure's development.

Education is one of vital factors tothat contribute to development of country.

With highly educated, talented employees, companies could achieve more success by increasing their productivitiesproductivity levels.
MisterWandering 18 / 321 130  
Nov 21, 2013   #4
estimate reflect a country's success

education level of nation

educational level

country's infrastructure's development

the development of infrastructure

Employees, who gained good academic knowledge and educated well,

Well-educated employees

would have more

to promote the productivity

for the development/advancement

would be is very important

country's growth of economics .

economic growth

If country has good medical service, as a result, people would be more healthy and happy which help them to work more productive.

A good heathcare system implies a more productive workforce.
gmad06 20 / 151 55  
Nov 22, 2013   #5
In my opinion, your introduction is not appropriate for your task.
Firstly, you are more likely talking about Economic growth as the main idea instead of a country's success.
Secondly, you are not being asked to agree or disagree with the theory.

hope this helps...


Home / Writing Feedback / Economic growth is defined as an increase in the number of goods and services produced in one year