Ecotourism is the concept of sustainable tourism management. Ecotourists are required to shield the places they visited, in terms of both the local ecology and culture. They compulsory provide endowment to the natural environments and indigenous traditions, such as participating in ecosystem conservation programs and local culture preservation projects. The ecotourism principles are also applied by the ecotourists in terms of accommodations and daily activities. They solicit lodges and travel companies that employ local workers. They also prefer to eco-friendly transportation modes, such as bicycles than cars that cause air pollutions.
environments = environment pollutions = pollution
you don't need to add "s" because they are uncountable noun
Hi Swr10, below are my thoughts for your summary.
- Ecotourism is
thea concept of
- places they visit
- such as participating in the ecosystem
There you have it Swr10, overall, the summary is written in a way that the reader is able to picture the story. The words you use are very conversational, you made sure that it is comprehensive and you managed to go straight on to the purpose of the prompt.
For future reference, however, mind the minor details such us the linking verbs, the right forms of the words and the overall impact of the essay boils down to the outcome of the essay. Keep writing and should you need further assistance, do let us know, we are here for you.
eco-friendly transportation mode
Hi swr10. Here I left the comment for you.
thea concept of ...
... to shield the places they ever visit
visited , in terms of both of the local ecology and culture.
They also prefer to the eco-friendly transportation mode
s , such as bicycles than cars that causes air pollutions.
(for the future, remember to put several articles in your essay)
Hope this can help you.