Three graphs provide a breakdown information of the enrollment in different colleges in the Higher Colleges of Technology, in 1999. The pie chart is measured in percentage.It is noticeable that Dubai Men's and women's took the second and the first place, whereas certificate was favored in the rest of two graphs.
Regarding to the first graph, Dubai women and men had the highest number of people, which are 547 and 426. Both genders of Abu Dhabi managed to reach to 273 for male and 218 for female. In the meantime , Al Ain women almost doubled its males, with its 218. The leftover three candidates, such as female of Ras Al Khalnan and both sexes of Shapjah had an insignificant gap, they were all roughly 170, except Khaimah men with 102.
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Much of this report sounded odd to me, as you were talking about numbers and "certificate", "diploma", and "bachelor" and it was unclear that you knew what the numbers and the terms represented. Also it would have been nice to give an overview saying that at every college, the number of women graduates surpassed the number of men. Also that the number of female graduates was greater than that of males for every level except diploma. Also, remember you can't really use words like "peak" "trough" "increase" or "decrease" unless you are talking about data changing over time.
It is noticeable that Dubai Men's and women's took the second and the first place, whereas certificate was favored in the rest of [other] two graphs. {this "whereas" sounds a bit odd, since Dubai is not competing against "certificate", they are two different data sets}
Regarding to the first graph, Dubai women and men had the highest number of people, which are 547 and 426. Both {"both" does not work here, since they both did not reach the same level} genders of Abu Dhabi managed to reach to 273 for male and 218 for female. In the meantime , Al Ain women almost doubled its males, with its 218. {this sounds odd, as if you are looking at the data over time, when this is really just a "snapshot"} The leftover {"leftover" sounds a bit odd in this context} three candidates, such as {don't use "such as" if you then list all of the groups} female[s ] of Ras Al Khalnan and both sexes of Shapjah had an insignificant [difference from each other]gap , they were all roughly 170, except Khaimah men with 102.
A shift[ing] to the second graph reveals that, the vast majority [of graduates] people preferred Certificate. The female[s ] had the value {it sounds odd to call this a "value" - this is the number of graduates} of 700, while this number was huger {"huger" is not a word} over 100 [higher] than the male's one. Diploma seemed to be less favor[ed], [as ]350 was the number of male [graduates at this level], whilst [there were only 310] female [graduates] was only 310 , a decrease {"decrease" isn't really right, since you are not looking at the data over time} of 40. Higher diploma was preferred by women with 300, a close [about] double [that of] compared to male[s ]. Bachelor had no competitor {this sounds odd to me - it's not really a competition} except females, the number peaked at 50.{peaked is wrong, since you are not looking at the data over time}
The last graph indicates that the Certificate had 50% of the total number of graduates, while the diploma had only 27[%]. The higher diploma had 20[%] and 3 percent [of graduates were at the] for the Bachelor [level].
