i have written this paper for my English class:
One might be dealing with a difficult situation in their life, which leads the person to start thinking of reasons why it happened.
It's tough when you say "One ---> their" because their is plural.
It's tough also when you say "Someone ---- their"
For good writing style, you might want to say:
One might be dealing with a difficult situation in his or her life, which leads
the person to start a process of thinking about reasons why it happened.
I just took out some words above and made a slight change.
Down here, I'll just take a word out, too. Sometimes less is more:
No matter the age, everybody deals with some type of stress in
their life.
This has to be one big sentence:
Considering everybody deals with puzzling matters everyd
ay, st ress leads to many negative effects that could be either short or long-termed.
Major short-term effects of stress
is are (or "include") moodiness, depression, muscle tension, separation from others, and certain sicknesses.
When the body keeps changing and
dealing is continuo
usly exposed to the same stressor it is the persistent long-term stress.
:-)