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First of all is the passion according to Freeman ...
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LET ME REVISE >> first of all, Freeman Thomas talked about passion can leads to the success because do it for love.
Secondly, Rupert Murdoach said that the success must ( must can be shaged have to) do with (...) nothing come
... to get the success and practice it,
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Then focus, in Noman Jewison's view who is
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in particular physically and mentally,
pass the shyness and self-doubtas well
said that persistence is ...