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Task 1- Energy Generation by Fuel Type


fauziyahtami 22 / 38 6  
Sep 28, 2016   #1
The pie charts illustrate about energy generation by fuel type in Florida in two separated years. Overall, the charts show the trend fuel in 2007 and trend prediction in 2017. It is clear that Natural gas is the most popular fuel in 2007 and is predicted will ascend in 2017, whereas renewables at the lowermost.

In 2007, Florida Natural gas consumption is less than two-fifths, and the amount of Natural gas by average Florida predicted will rise to just over a half in 2017. During the same period, Nuclear utilizing is predicted will climb from 11,9 percent to 15,9 percent.

By 2017, several consumption of energy is predicted will be plummeting. Coral consumption is depicted to descend to approximately 23,7 percent. On the other hand, renewable has a very small number and will plunge to 1,5 percent in 2017. Other energy estimated to sharp drop from just over one in ten to less than one in twenty, while oil plunge to a small number.




ryan31 65 / 96 15  
Sep 28, 2016   #2
hai fauzi
here's some suggestions for you
I hope it helps

... generation by fuel type in Florida in two separated years.and it separated within two years.

... the trend fuel in 2007 and trendit prediction in 2017.

... is less than two-fifths, and the amount of Natural gas by average Florida predicted will rise to just over a half in 2017.I do not know about this sentence maybe " the amount of natural gas will predicted rose to over a half in 2017"

... Nuclear utilizing is predicted will climbincreased gradually from 11,9 percent to 15,9 percent.

By 2017, several consumptions of energy is predicted ...

thank you
justivy03 - / 2,367 607  
Sep 28, 2016   #3
Hi Tami, please find additional suggestions below, on order to enhance your analysis.

- The pie charts illustrate aboutthe energy
- in Florida in two separated years.
- Overall, the charts show the trend of fuel in
- is predicted willto ascend in 2017,
- whereas renewablesfuel are at the lowermost.

- gas by average Floridais predicted
- willto rise to
- just over a half in 2017.
- Nuclear utilizingutilization is predicted
- willto climb from
- several consumption of energy is predicted
- will be plummetingto plummet .
- renewable energy has a very small
- Other forms of energy estimated to
- sharp drop sharply from just over one

There you have it Tami, I hope you follow through with the corrections above and for future writing reference, mind the form if the words you incorporate in your analysis and make sure to stick to the information given in the diagram.


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