Kurt, I am highly confused by the way that you are presenting this paper. Are you presenting a study plan to your professor? If so, then what is the actual thesis statement for this research? What do you hope to prove through the research? How do you plan to prove it? What is your methodology for developing your suggestions, recommendations, and conclusions? The information you have presented seems to be based mostly on personal opinion and lacks the proper referencing guides in the study plan
Majority of your sentences do not have topic or subject sentences. The declarations are often incomplete. Examples of these problematic sentences are:
Being a Police Officer who just ...
The correct form is :
Being a police officer entering my 10th year of service, I will be testing for Sergeant in the coming weeks. Should I be promoted to the said position, professional leadership will be paramount to my professional success in consideration of the safety and development of my subordinates.
Please review all of your sentences for structure and presentation. These problems with your sentence presentations lead to incoherent paragraphs that leave the reader wondering about what you are trying to say and why. You may want to consider seeking out our highly professional and excellent editing services in order to ensure that the paper you will be turning in shall be grammatically correct, using the correct punctuation marks, and deliver properly developed sentence presentations. Right now, aside from the study plan question, the work you provided needs professional editing in order to work for the purpose you are trying to design it for.