Please help me with a peer review of my paper my English professor says I am a terrible essay writer with unclear thesis and main points. She is always saying where is the BIG 3? support? Thesis? Please help me make this paper better. My Thesis is "Fetal Alcohol Syndrome (FAS) is one hundred percent preventable; which has an outcome that is one hundred percent irreversable with a life time of consequneces for the child."
Format is APA Rubric= Clear thesis and plan of development in introduction. Paper follows a logical organized pattern, Transitions are utilized, Paper is concise and well-written, Content demonstrates an understanding of topic and related concepts, spelling and punctuation and grammar are accurate, formal language is used throughout paper, conclusion wraps up entire piece effectively.