As the English language becomes more widespread, some speakers of other languages fear that English loanwords are gradually replacing perfectly adequate native words.
To what extent do you believe that people should seek to protect the 'purity' of their language from the influence of English?
There is no doubt that English is becoming increasingly important as a language of international communication in the fields of science, trade, entertainment, and international relations. Not surprisingly, English words have appeared in many other languages throughout the world. Consequently, this has prompted some people to seek to defend their languages from this type of change. In this essay I would like to argue this problem.
It is considered by many that the increasing amount of native words replaced by English words will finally lead to the death of the less influential languages. It is obvious that it is unlikely to happen, although it depends on particular occasions. As an example, the dissolution of a language could be caused by demolition of a country of spoken language as a consequence of a global war. Anyways, what is likely to happen is a merge of languages ensued by blending English and native words. In this case, the vocabulary of native language should be protected. However, there are some difficulties, as the English is still considered as a lingua franca for the most of the fields.
Looking at from a broad historical perspective particular languages become more or less powerful despite any measures taken to protect them. Most humans accept that impact of dominant languages is simply unconstrained.
In my view, all the protection efforts are likely to prove futile. Sooner or later humans it should be conceded that languages change, as all the words of a majority of languages blend or replace each other. Nowadays, English is one of the most spoken languages throughout the world. Obviously, it affects on the other languages in different cases.
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4783 Ivan, your paraphrased prompt is incomplete. You were supposed to mention that there are languages that are slowly losing their sense of origin because of the emergence of loanwords from the English language. That is one of the key points for discussion in this essay and should have been properly represented in the paraphrasing. Another problem is that you are arguing a problem in the essay when what you are being asked to do is discuss your "opinion" of the topic. There is a tremendous difference between being asked to discuss the extent of your belief as opposed to "arguing" a problem.
This glaring mistake in your task accuracy automatically shows that you did not understand what the prompt is requiring your do in your essay discussion. As such, there is a clear lack of comprehension of the questions posed and instructions given. Therefore, this essay would not have passed the Task Accuracy section and as such, would have automatically failed all of the given scoring criteria for this test.
Since I already explained to you that there is a difference between the way that you chose to present the paraphrased prompt and your discussion when compared to the original, I will give you an opportunity to correct your mistake so that you can practice writing the correct response for this type of essay. I will not immediately give you a failing score since this is a practice test and as such, should be considered the training ground for your testing skills and abilities. Come back here with a more proper discussion that is relevant to the prompt and then I will score you on it. I want to be fair to you and give you a chance to redeem yourself for a better practice test score.
