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Why do not enjoyable things: necessity, importance for the future, families and friends in our lives


soshianet 16 / 47  
Aug 20, 2011   #1
Some people try to avoid some things that they dislike or don't enjoy doing them. From my point of view, we have to do some things that aren't favorable because these things are necessary for us, are linked to our future, and are related to our families or friends.

Mainly, there are many things that seem essential in our lives. There are some things that could be identified as our requirements and needs; so, if we keep away from them, we might lose some other things that could be more significant for us. In this regard, avoiding our requirements and needs sometimes could cause of losing things that related to our lives. For example, I may dislike my job, but I cannot find a new appropriate job, so I have to continue my job for a long time.

Moreover, some things that we have a negative view about them are linked to our future because we maybe get better position in the next few years. Also, doing these things that are disliked, beside the cause of improving our positions, may be increased our prestige in the future. For example, mathematics as a difficult lesson among other ones is not a favorite lesson for many students, but it is helpful to become a professional engineer in the time to come.

Finally, we have to do some things that appear to be not enjoyable for us, but are related to our families or friends' lives. They occasionally ask us to do some things for them inasmuch we like them; we perform for them; on the other hand, they maybe have done some things so that they are expecting us to compensate for them. For instance, I lend some money to my friend because I really like him, or I lend money because he lent me some money formerly.

To sum up, people should do some things they do not getting a pleasure from doing due to a necessity of doing them, importance of them for the future, and positions of our families or friends in our lives. Therefore, doing some dislike things can change our life to being beauty.

yurika888 3 / 5  
Aug 20, 2011   #2
Well written!

Second Paragraph: Finally, we have to do some things that appear to be not enjoyable for us, but are related to our families or friends' lives. They occasionally ask us to do some things for them in as much we like them; we perform for them; on the other hand, they maybe have done some things so that they are expecting us to compensate for them. For instance, I lend some money to my friend because I really like him, or I lend money because he lent me some money formerly.
laxmi - / 1  
Aug 21, 2011   #3
In this world where the situation and circumstances prevails the people fate, sometimes we may not have any options left to do than to chose the only one option that you don't love to. Whatsoever every one try to get the best and the thing that he/she enjoys which is not always going to happen. This society where we live doesn't allow to live by yourself or for yourself. It also ask to live for other and the loved one's betterment. Suppose i have my future and my life far from my loved one's and the people whom i love really needs me to be with them. At this moment i cant be selfish enough and choose the thing which is propitious for me only.

If life is only meant to live yourself, human beings would not be much celebrated than other animals in the earth. Moreover it is also always not necessary that every people gets what he deserved or what he ask. This is part of life and everybody must accept this with the grace or else he/she will grow inane.

I will put you an example of accepting the things that you don't enjoy. Somebody poor in maths and good in biology is constraint to select engineering as a carrier than a doctor only because he has other brothers and sisters to precede him. As the academic fee to be paid to study doctor is almost five times much higher than the engineer and his parents had a limited financial savings for the education of his and his predecessors. To coup his parents financial position , he should refrain pursuing his carrier as a doctor.

The string put by you is conspicuous which we will come up with prominent examples in day to day life.
OP soshianet 16 / 47  
Aug 22, 2011   #4
There is not any points? please tell me my mistakes
vivianliu 1 / 3  
Aug 23, 2011   #5
In my opinion, you should extend your example and write more details to support your points.


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