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'equally in every subject' - univerities to accept equal numbers of males and females


hima bindu 1 / -  
Jun 20, 2012   #1
Dear Sir/Madam, Please help me with this essay.

"Education is the right of every student". Though this is a known fact, still the girls are not allowed to join certain groups of subjects in education. But, in many aspects it is proved that girls can do equally well as if boys.

To begin with in the present world women are competing with men in every aspect. They have proved their ability that with hardwork and dedication they can touch the heights. For instance: In the field of law which was considered that being a female they cannot be lawyers. This thought was washed out when a women became the Supreme Court Judge. So, education can shine the stones in the jems if given opportunity.

This demarcation is still seen in the field of Army, Police , CRPF and Navy. When the advertisements for these fields will be released, there is a clear indication that "Only male candidates between 18-21yrs should apply". Though this trend has changed to some extent but, still the male domination is seen in these fields. To illustrate, Mrs.Kiran Bedi, has become the police officer and served the country for many years. if given chance females can create wonders.

Now if we consider about medical field, there are certain branches for which females are thought to be ineligible. Such as, "Orthopedics". People believe that women are very delicate and they cannot handle client's with fracture, dislocations of bones, etc. but, if given chance they can prove themselves of be best Orthopedicians as if males.

In a nutshell, Universities are supposed to give equal number of opportunities for both the gender equally in every subject.

hanganhmai - / 1  
Jun 20, 2012   #2
"Education is the right of every student". Though this is a known fact, the girls are not still allowed to join certain groups of subjects in education. However, in many aspects it is proved that girls can do it better than boys.

To begin with in the present world, women are competing with men in every aspect. They have proved their ability that with hardwork and dedication they can reach a career high, for instance; if they were the women, they can not be lawyers in the past. In the reality, this thought was washed out when a women became the Supreme Court Judge. So, education can shine the stones in the jems if given opportunity.

i can just rewrite some sentences; however, i not sure that right :)
EF_Susan - / 2,365 12  
Jun 21, 2012   #3
"Education is the right of every student". Though this is a known fact, still the girls are not allowed to join certain groups of subjects in education. But, in many aspects it has been proven that girls can do equally well as if boys.

To begin with in the present world women are competing with men in every aspect. They have proven their ability that with hardwork and dedication they can touch the heights.

Now if we consider the medical field, there are certain branches for which females are thought to be ineligible. Such as, "Orthopedics". People believe that women are very delicate and they cannot handle client's with fracture, dislocations of bones, etc. but, if given chance they can prove themselves to be as equally skilled Orthopedicians as males. In a nutshell, Universities are supposed to give equal number of opportunities for both the gender equally in every subject.

Please consider one final sentiment including your OWN belief.


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