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How ethanol fuel is produced by corn

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2 days ago   #1

production of ethanol fuel from corn

The diagram describe various stages in the production of ethanol fuel from corn. The process consists of eight main steps beginning with the corn stored and finishing with transporting.

At the beginning of the process corn after carefully harvested, it is put into storage. After this is taken to mill, adding the water is required during the corn milling process, the milling productions cooked in 4 hours. At the next step of the process, it is fermented within 2 days then separated to liquid and solid by-product. The liquid is used in this process of making ethanol fuel and solid by-product part is used for another purpose. The progress continues with the liquid part which is purified ethanol into 5 hours. After this has been done, the produce is stored and then it is transported, products are distributed to retailers and consumers, which marks the final stage of the process.
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2 days ago   #2
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