Hi
You should include your prompt in your post so that others can give you more relevant feed backs.
Everyone has the right to education and it is one of the main concerns of a family when raising the children.
The question about whether or not the number of boys is more more than that of girls in schools is a controversial one
Overall, I believe that the ratio of boys to girls significantly off killer in some countries due to some reasons
First, in many under-developed countries, not all
of the Government funded schools are offering free
of cost education
can be beared
can be borne.So in this situation, boys are regarded as important since they can look after the property and parents when they will get old, inherit land, and lead the family name or honor,whereas, the girls are regarded as burden to the family since they will have to marry and will responsible for taking care of her husband's family.
.... this sentence is too long and hence does not flow well. You need to rephrase this.