The expert teachers to make students learn the material?

Is it teachers responsibility to make students learn the material?
I believe that it is teachers responsibility to make students learn. students are so young to realized the value of education so they need them to lead them to learn.

First of all teachers have enough experience and skill. they know how to teach the students because they graduated in teaching field.Therefore they can use their method and learning style to teach the students.

Second of all students are in appropriate age to follow the direction so teachers should use the best way and method for students to be educate .

Third of all students in this age want to spend their time in some activity that not only its not useful but also its so harmful for them so teachers should try to manage their time and activity and force them to learn the material.

Experience has proven that most of the students prefer do something other than studying, they couldn't be self-learn. Thus the expert teachers know how to be reliable, creative, up to date , friendly and be a best guide for students.so students trust this kind of teachers and try to follow the direction and learn the materials at school.

In conclusion teaching is sensitive and delicate so they are the best pattern for student to obey they rules and learn all lessons.

Hi, I will try to help with your essay :)

I believe that it is ateacher's responsibility to make students learn. S tudents are sotoo young to realize the value of education, so theyteachers need them to lead them. to learn.

Maybe instead of "make students learn"... say, "encourage students to learn"

First of all, teachers have enough experience and skill. T hey know how to teach the students because they graduated in the teaching field.Therefore, they can use their method and learning styleeducation and experience to teach the students.

Second of all students are in appropriate age to follow the direction so teachers should use the best way and method for students to be educate .

This sounds repetitive, because you mentioned this point already. Try to think of a better reason for students needing their teacher's guidance. Also, avoid using phrases like "second of all, third of all" etc. because people don't really talk like that.

Third of all students in this age want to spend their time in some activity that not only its not useful but also its so harmful for them so teachers should try to manage their time and activity and force them to learn the material.

Good point. But you say, "students in this age" and you are not specific about the age group you are writing about.

Experience has proven that most of the students prefer do something other than studying, they couldn't be self-learn.
This statement is not supportive to your main point.

You have a good basis for your essay, but it still needs some work. Check your grammar, and strengthen your reasons for the importance of teachers. Good luck in school :)