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'How to Explore the Pantanal' - article


Permata92 3 / 5  
Aug 11, 2016   #1
HOW TO EXPLORE THE PANTANAL
By: Selvi Permata Groda

The Pantanal is the largest wetland in the world which has over 81.000 square miles. It located in the center of South America that quietly shelters the highest centralization of wildlife in there. It is a part of nation park and UNESCO world Heritage site which considerate a serious region of the world which appraise that more than 1000 species of fish, mammals, birds,amphibians, and reptiles live in this seedbad of biodiversity

This article suggest an advice if you visited to Pantanal. The best time to go there to see mind-boogging concentrations of widlife clustered around water pit in the dry season. The flooded and receding water is speacial among photographers.

Fly into Cuiba and drive 1.5 hours to Pocone to acces the Transpantaneira which became a part of Northern Pantanal and if you want to go to Southern Pantanal, the writer mention to fly into Corumba or Compo Grade after that you can board a riverboat to reach there.
ramzi06 9 / 17 4  
Aug 11, 2016   #2
Greetings Mrs Selvi,
just sharing for several information regarding to your wrting,

It is a part of nation park probably you want to mention "national park"
and UNESCO world Heritage site which considerate a serious region of the world ...

Better for you to state :
It is a part of national park and UNESCO world heritage site as a protected area in which more than 1000 species of fish, mammals, birds,amphibians, and reptiles live.

This article suggest an advice if you visited to Pantanal.informs the reader The best time to go there to see mind-bogging concentrations of wildlife clustered around water pit is in the dry season between March and September (additional information). The flooded and receding water (what do you mean this one?) is special among photographers.

That's all
Thanks


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